[Toraerie] Re: Words of Wisdom and Poetry

[Eyja Bassadottir]

New verse to #8 on the site:

 8.
    Officers do     your duties well
    to High Ones give    your written words.

for

8. If you're an officer you have a form to fill out.


High Ones referring to superior officers.


And nitty gritty amendments:

Here is foretold         for who follow
    in our Tower Tall:
Drink, my daughters,   the draughts of Mimir,
    o goddesses of gold.
Stand, my sons,     with Odin's sight
    o seeds of Heimdall's sons.
Come to know      this knowledge of old
    of Aerie kin full-gone.

For  2., should worm word  be kept, or should it change to wood rot?
    Cheer, like silver,    is cherished when spread
    but apathy shared    is like wood worm

Just a re-ording in the last line:
 3. Whether word-skilled or         silent in speech
    a captain must say    commands to sailors.
    Yet better still        is clear strong words
    so no questions        within may stirr.

~Eyja
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